I am at your feet....... - BaDaSsBeLiZeAnChIk's Blog

I am at your feet.......

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At Your Feet....... Where art thou tonight my love? What is it that you do? It's true my heart is torn apart When I'm not with you. What enchanted thoughts swim through your head? Are any of them of me? When, my dear, you go to bed Is it my face you see? Who is honored with your presence now? And do they even care? The thought of you not being admired Fills me with despair. Do they appreciate your lovliness? Do they marvel at your splendor? Do they love to hear your velvet voice? And do they adore your smile so tender? If they do not Then they are all fools and had you been with me Every day, my love, you'd be a king because that's what you are to me. I'm at your feet and I come with gifts my body, heart, and soul. They're yours to do with as you please to command and control. I give myself with all my heart I'm yours for all of time Your slave, your queen, your anything only say you are mynz. -Gigi

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blueobfuscate
blueobfu...

Female, 34, Copperas Cove, TX

Posted Nov 12, 2008


very nice, i can feel youir emotions


Chase_Dis_Papi
Chase_Di...

Male, Age Private, New Rochelle, NY

Posted Nov 13, 2008


I love it...keep it coming Whoo Hoo =)


alvinrushingjr65
alvinrus...

Male, 44, Chicago, IL

Posted Nov 28, 2008


I AM A KING WHO IS SEEKING THAT FOREVER QUEEN OF VISION , LOVE, ,AND INTEGRITY.


puertorican_moroccan
puertori...

Female, 20, Laguna Hills, CA

Posted Nov 29, 2008


yes girl....you got the gift!!!!....i swear it bought a tear to my eye



keeep them comeing mami


maya-asia xxxxxxxx


sweet_778
sweet_778

Female, 22, Fresno, CA

Posted Mar 18


GIRL YOU ARE TALENTED IM LOVING THE POEM....


Daveg2007
Daveg2007

Male, Age Private, Corpus Christi, TX

Posted Mar 20


Interesting poem, very good actually. Why don't you fall in love with Jesus? He won't let you down.


dulce_de_leche2009
dulce_de...

Female, 18, Washington, DC

Posted Mar 21


i really love it...you have a gift! keep it up!!


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CLOSED

Male, 30, Rochester, NY

Posted Apr 01


rela nice babe I too do poetry I did 2 post though Im new to this form of blogging but nice work zilla


96Fleetwood
96Fleetwood

Male, 33, Panorama City, CA

Posted Apr 07


I really felt your words. Very nice sweetie. Take care and keep your love goingt. Seems to me that your very genuine. Good luck xoxoxo


massager4u
massager4u

Male, Age Private, Council Bluffs, IA

Posted Apr 27


very nice poetry can I make copies of it to show others?


rockymeet
rockymeet

Male, Age Private, India

Posted Jun 15


hello great i like to read keep rocking no word for this
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JoK3Rw1Ld
JoK3Rw1Ld

Male, 22, Bensenville, IL

Posted Jun 19


thats a deep poem


jrs10025
jrs10025

Male, Age Private, Clearwater, FL

Posted Jun 25


I just had to say that your emotions are extremely well expressed, your rythm was near perfect and your simple yet impactful choice of words, all added up to an absolutely wonderful, well thought out example of poetry!
I'm really impressed. Keep writing and loving as long as you can becasue, unlike money, those feelings go with you when your gone from this earth! Great job, sweetie!


ORALCKCCC
ORALCKCCC

Male, Age Private, United Arab Emirates

Posted Jun 25


It's very nice.
I love it toooooo much.
U toched not only my heart , but also my..........

Guess....!


ORALCKCCC
ORALCKCCC

Male, Age Private, United Arab Emirates

Posted Jun 25


I'm very sorry.
I didn't mean what u thought about !!!


Mudiagasco
Mudiagasco

Male, Age Private, Nigeria

Posted Jul 01


Hello, I want to dedicate the poem (From Your Sexy Guy) below to you in my upcoming book, if you accept to be my friend and send me your phone number to give you a call to hear your caressing voice right away. I am dying to hear from you now.
FROM YOUR SEXY GUY
She is an angel with an enthralling face,
Smooth baby-like skin space,
Her voice melts my mind like milky melody;
But do I understand her?
She plants my heart with tender scars
Though they say no man can fully drink
The labyrinths of an Eve,
Oh would she take me to her sink?
I weave sighs of milky heaves
Each time I catch your charming eyes
All my life sorrows say good bye.

Written by
Blessed Mudiaga Adjekpagbon
Tel: +2348059265333
www.blessed-mudiaga.blogspot.c om
www.myspace.com/mudiagasco
Email: blessedadje@yahoo.com


joecallahan
joecallahan

Male, 28, Fort Collins, CO

Posted Jul 03


Very nice and warm Gigi. Hope to read more poems from you.


peterbolton
peterbolton

Male, 51, United Kingdom

Posted Jul 10


hi pete here manchester england my love is look good


Siempreamando
Siemprea...

Male, 39, New York, NY

Posted Jul 15


Wow, you sound like me. And that's not game niether.


Valor8
Valor8

Male, 31, Germany

Posted Jul 22


That's a very good poem. For my own taste though it sounds a little too submissive. We all need balance in our lives, whether in love or not...


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