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The Voice In My Room

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Well here I go again ladies, this afternoon I was shaving, after that started to pick up in my room, I turned to my right and there he was staring right at me and looking deep into my eyes, I took a step forward to where he was standing, I asked him why he had that look? it was a very confused look sorta like the "puppy look" oh my god! "what happened to you buddy?" I imagine but I just wanted him to talk, to get whatever was troubling his mind out, "na' mano" he replied. "common, you know you can tell me anything, I have been there for you, get it out" I said. He started talking to me as he looked up, but I already knew what was happening to him because a few night back I heard some noises coming out of his room so I went to see what was going on, of course he was laying on bed looking at the ceiling... at 2 AM! Dude!!! estava desvelado... y la razon de su desvelo tenia nombre y apellido, pues escuche lentamente cuando susurro su nombre... when a person whispers your name, something is brewing. Well "tell me something" I asked, "why is this lady steals your sleep way?" I mean I have told Him about this already!! "ten cuidado mano estoy harto de decirtelo pero no me haces caso loko" always the same thing with this fool!! the mother %#&@$!er don't know how to pick nice girls. I had to cheer him up that's what friends do so I told him "look nigga you are not that ugly (lol) you kinda funny when you want to be, but above all you are a good kid," he looked at me again " you know you are" He opened his lips and said "NAIVE,you forgot to say I'm naive" umm he was right, naive beyond believe... I mean I know nobody understands this jackass better than me. Anda por las nubes y desvelandose. "do I know who she is?" He said "yes" y le hice una ultima pregunta... "vale la pena? esta chica lo vale? las noches sin dormir? tus llamadas y los pensamientos que le das dia y noche? Espere su respuesta y solo me dio su mirada perdida... lo mire a los ojos, me miro a los mios, ambas miradas se convirtieron en una sola, me aparte del espejo sentandome en el piso trate de contestarme las preguntas que me acabava de hacer.

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Female, 30, Laurel, MD

Posted December 05, 2008


wow...all i can say is.... we tend to live in make believe....we ignore reality... we ignore the fact that we are unhappy..because there are few happy moments.... then boom reality hits us...and we ask ourselves ....vale la pena? and all these things... but i believe that if you have to step back and ask yourself if it is worth it then its more then likely not worth it. because if you have to ask yourself that then that means that your unhappy and that this unhappiness is consuming the happiness you have.... so not its not worth it...! yeah im done i think....there may be more to come later!


Dr_Papi03
Dr_Papi03

Male, 36, Newark, NJ

Posted December 05, 2008


yes but u kinda missed why the "character" was in conflict


prettylecky
prettylecky

Female, 34, Newark, NJ

Posted December 05, 2008


Very creative and interesting I must say! I like it. Most of the time I must agree, that person you lose sleep over,do anything for to prove how much you care, and wait to hear from.... They are usually NOT worth it. It's those rare instances, you know the one's you tend to over look that might just deserve that second glance. At least that's from my experience. =)


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Female, 30, Laurel, MD

Posted December 05, 2008


the said "character" needs to stop fighting a battle that is loss... no offense. but like i said.... if u have to ask your self if it is worth it then its not.... .... yeah thats all i can think of for now


Dr_Papi03
Dr_Papi03

Male, 36, Newark, NJ

Posted December 05, 2008


lol well alexis i kinda like your pov very interesting, and yes miss debuche like you told me last nite, its a loss battle


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Female, 30, Laurel, MD

Posted December 06, 2008


im still on your team tho.....And its DuBuche...but u get an "A" for effort....i hope you understand that there are over 6,602,224,175 in the world and over 3,301,112,087 are women...so trust me when i say you will find someone who will make your heart sing for joy.. and cause you nothing but utter happiness...and when that day comes you will be complete....so umm...KEEP ON TRUCKING???! LOL


Dr_Papi03
Dr_Papi03

Male, 36, Newark, NJ

Posted December 06, 2008


Well I guess that if I had to ask that question obviously something wasn't right, which leads to "am I wasting my time?" In the end it seems like I did. and yeah sara more than 50% of the population is female... now I'll try to count the ones that are really worth it with ... 2 fingers


Dr_Papi03
Dr_Papi03

Male, 36, Newark, NJ

Posted December 07, 2008


god knows, i sure don't


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Female, 30, Laurel, MD

Posted December 07, 2008


im sorry u feel that there are only 2 women in the world worth sleepless nights...honestly i feel like u should just let her go.. and if it hurts u so much then i think u need to be like..."we can't be friends or anything right now bc my feelings for u are to strong and i cant just be your friend and i need time to accept that, thats all we will ever be"... then cut her out cold turkey... and if she is a true friend she will understand and if shes someone who plays games she wont care and take it as a joke...because us girls can be heartless at times! and well u would be better off not knowing her.... so yeah just do that and remember its not macaroni and cheese if theres no cheese!


Dr_Papi03
Dr_Papi03

Male, 36, Newark, NJ

Posted December 07, 2008


well the song "HEARTLESS" reminds me of her actually...


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